Dear diary,
I saw my father (prospero) causing a tempest out in the sea. I begged and pleased with him to spare the lives of thoses onboard as ariel destroyed the ship a their chances of getting to safety. He tells me its ok there were no casualties and that they are ok as i calm down.
September 25, 2016 at 8:23 pm
Erol, you demonstrate understanding of what Prospero tells Miranda about the shipwreck.
You also show that you have identified Miranda’s compassionate nature, in her concern for the sailors on board.
A good start – try to write a little more in your next piece!